this prose's a problem

I think I'll start posting some of my horrible poetry. They'll be more like quick vignettes between the much longer art texts that take me days weeks months to write. I'll even accompany it with a nicer looking image.

Underline

It really hurt to say
To you, that I wanted
No more.
     A feeble period
        which begged for an asterisk
on an otherwise blissful score

Lara Shipley Panel 3  "Relations of Two series"